~Cindy
Judging contests
I’m engrossed right now in judging a contest that I
agreed to read ten books for. That’s ten full length books! I must have been
out of my shriveled little mind. They’re in a genre I don’t usually write,
which is good and bad. Good because I don’t have any preconceived ideas, bad
because they all seem a little over the top to me. Too dramatic, too emotional,
too contrived. Still I can judge fairly, I think, because a good one stands out
even more so than usual. But the mistakes in most I’ve read bother me. A lot.
Which brings me to the real point of this blog. Why, oh
why, don’t writers use spell check? A misspelled word drives me nuts. It’s hard
to concentrate on the worth of the story line if I have to stop and wince every
now and then. And why don’t their editors do a better job? These are published
books, remember. A few of them are self-pubbed, but I would think those authors
would be extra careful. Surely they’ve got spell-check on their computers.
And I don’t have to be hit on the head to get the point.
I guess I prefer a little subtlety, and I’m not talking about the sex scenes. I
write erotica, after all, and that’s hardly subtle. I’m talking about the blood
and gore scenes, when the writer goes on and on about how horrible the
predicament is until the pages fairly drip crimson. I get the point, guys. You
don’t have to repeat and repeat.
But as I say, the good one really stands out. So here’s
to those one or two good ones, whose work is a delight to read. One of them in
particular is terrific! But I don’t think I’ll take on so many to read all at
once again.
Naturally I can’t let you go without a new excerpt from
my latest book, Stormy Pursuit. Just released on the seventh, it’s the second
in my series with hunky, sexy elves with peaked ears. Please let me know what
you think of it.
Stormy Pursuit
by Jean Hart Stewart
available TODAY from Ellora's Cave
Blurb: Book 2 in the Passionate Pursuits series.
Hanna and Quinby, beautiful twin daughters of the powerful elf Lars, have one thing in common—they’ve both fallen in love with men they think they can never have.
They’re of an age where their desire to explore their burgeoning sexual feelings leads to thrilling, passionate encounters with their men, but their upbringing and beauty makes them a target for a villainous enemy hell-bent on power.
If they want any chance of a future with their men, a lifetime of intense pleasure and love, then they must all work together to bring down the enemy before he destroys everything the growing Erriksen family holds dear.
Excerpt: ADULT
He was
shuddering now, his big frame shaking, and lifted her hand away.
“Let me
pleasure you, love. You aren’t ready for me yet.” His husky voice sounded so
sexy Hanna reached up to kiss him.
“Not yet,
sweetheart. Just lie on the cushions while I love you.”
She did as she
was told, lying back and admiring every move of his muscled body as he
stretched on beside her, even though he on the hard floor. He raised himself on
one elbow and began to play with her nipples, which immediately hardened. She’d
felt them harden in her dreams, but she’d never envisioned the way it felt to
have her lover tweak and pull on them into they were elongated and so sensitive
she moved restlessly. Then he let his hand wander down to her waist, caressing
her navel with his lips and then going lower. He completely surprised her by
taking her sensitive clitoris with his mouth. Shocked, she tried to push his
head away, but he caught her hands and laving her with his tongue until her
hips started moving restlessly.
“Now,” he
whispered. “Right now.”
Raising his hot
body over hers he let her hands free. In in a quick motion he inserted his cock
into the tip of her cunt, going slowly at first. She felt a slight pain as
something inside her seemed to give way, and suddenly Court pushed that big rod
all the way into to her body. She gasped at the shock of being so filled.
Surely he’d pushed himself clear to her navel. He started to withdraw, his
beautiful eyes concerned and guilty and she smiled and held him still.
“Don’t stop,
Court. Do anything else you want, but don’t stop.”
He stayed where
he was for a moment, looking at her anxiously, and she pulled on him
impatiently. Evidently what he saw in her face reassured him, and he smiled and
pushed his cock all the way in again. This time waves of pleasures exploded
through her body, stronger and stronger with each of his pounding strokes. She
tried to watch his face, but her desire soon began to make her writhe against
him, forgetting all else in the pleasure of his powerful thrusts. Suddenly she
felt her world explode in a burst of passion like none she’d ever dreamed, and
she screamed and then went limp.
With a victor’s
smile, Court pounded into her two more times before he collapsed, groaning his
own release in a loud masculine version of her scream.
He lay on top
of her until both their breathing slowed. As he started to lift his body from
hers, she clutched him to her.
“I like you
just where you are, Court. Don’t leave me.”
He kissed her
sweetly, but still started to draw away.
“My love, I’ve
just had the most incredible experience of my life. But I fear I pounded you
into a pulp. Let me go before I attack you again.”

6 comments:
Jean,
lol, we all get crazy now and then:) I made the mistake of volunteering to judge three contests before I realized that they were going to overlap and cause me a time crunch!
Seriously though, kudos on volunteering:)
Your cover is beautiful and the excerpt is wonderful. Looks like another winner to me!
Congrats on your new release, Jean! I know it will do great. :)
I've judged for the RITAs several times and trying to get through 7 or 8 books while also working a full time EDJ and writing my own novels was murder. I also signed up for a genre I don't write and I was pleasantly surprised that the books were all so good.
Hope you burn up the net with your sales! :)
Yay Jean! Congrats on your new release. :)
This sounds like a wonderful, passion filled book.
:)
I adore the intimate moment on the cover.
bidelia78@yahoo.com
Thanks so much, ladies... I'm thrilled with the release of this one. EC does such great covers, and I love this one
Jean, the book cover and excerpt for Stormy Pursuit are beautiful!
XXOO Kat
Sounds fabulous, Jean! On my way over to buy...LOL!
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